What I have learned from screenwriting: I cannot spell Amanada Amanda. I think this calls for a renaming. You shouldn't have to re-type your main character's name three times. Why can't I spell Amanada Amanda?!
That's it. Girl, you are now named... um... Rose. Because I can spell that.But you will not be a Mary Sue!
I also typo right for ring a lot. Even when I'm talking about the One Ring. It makes things really confusing. My guy-named-Ben just took out a key right. Why can't I type?!
Now... to write three more pages of this before two. Crap.
That's it. Girl, you are now named... um... Rose. Because I can spell that.
I also typo right for ring a lot. Even when I'm talking about the One Ring. It makes things really confusing. My guy-named-Ben just took out a key right. Why can't I type?!
Now... to write three more pages of this before two. Crap.